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Story idea...

Sat Jan 24, 2009, 11:21 AM
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He watched her carefully as she exited the main entrance to Knutti with revenge on his mind. This was his time to regain what was rightfully his, and he'd be darned if he wasn't going to give her what she so rightfully deserved.

After all, she was a sinner in the eyes of God and for that, she needed to be punished. Grabbing his ice pick, he opened the driver's side door and slowly climbed out of the vehicle. God was depending on him to do His job, and he'd be darned if he'd allow himself to fail.

Approaching her from behind, he purposely startled her as she made her way to the college's Student Center. "Hey, Kayla, what's up?"

She abruptly turned around to face him, "Nothing. Just heading to the Student Center. What about you?" He smirked. His time for redemption was drawing near. Gripping the ice pick hidden behind his back, he moved closer to her.

"Well, I'm going to be busy tonight, that's for sure."

Kayla stopped in her tracks, "Why's that?" Her intuition instantly told her that something wasn't quite right. Something about his tone of voice didn't set well with her. However, assuming that she was simply paranoid, she decided not to pay it any mind. That was until she felt his hand covering her mouth.

Panicked, she tried to pry his hand off of her mouth, but to no avail. His grip was just too strong. Struggling against him, she lacked to feel the ice pick poking her neck until it was too late. Before she knew it, the man had stabbed her in the throat with the sharp instrument, silencing her forever.

Letting her fall to the ground, he smiled to himself, opened his Bible to the book of Colossians and proceeded to read the following verse: "Put to death therefore what is earthly in you: sexual immorality, impurity, passion, evil desire and covetousness. which is idolatry. On account of these, the wrath of God is coming." He then paused before adding, "May God have no mercy on your soul." Satisfied that his first job was finally complete, he smiled to himself and glanced up towards the sky above. Finally, God would make her pay for ALL of her sins. Casually laughing to himself, he marked the page, closed the Bible and placed it next to the woman's body before slowly walking away.



To Be Continued?

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:iconkissu-kisshu:
Hey, Vikki. It's me, Chelsea. :3 Just dropping by to say "hi" and whatnot. xp

...Now I'd better get to work. <.<;;

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Suwa-Kun: UWAH! Someone save me from my imagination! (Bitter Virgin)
:iconluckygirl87:
Hey!!!! What's up? Lol.

Same here. I'm almost on the tenth page of my paper...

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"Sometimes it's better to look away than to see it all."
:iconkissu-kisshu:
Ugh~Tired... Just finished my essays(haha, yeah it took that long).

So how did your essay go? x3

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Suwa-Kun: UWAH! Someone save me from my imagination! (Bitter Virgin)
:iconluckygirl87:
They went okay, I suppose. I'm done for this year, so yea...

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"Sometimes it's better to look away than to see it all."
:iconvlastas:
Thank you very much for the :+devwatch: :hug:

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I´m sorry for my poor English. Please be patient with my late answers. I have to think about everything a lot and it takes me some time to create a meaningful text.
:iconluckygirl87:
You're welcome!

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"Sometimes it's better to look away than to see it all."
:iconjellineck:
Thanks for the fav :D
:iconluckygirl87:
You're welcome!

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"Sometimes it's better to look away than to see it all."
:icondoku-sama:
thanks for the faves ^^

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Avie done by : *KAkiraAvies *o*
:iconluckygirl87:
You're welcome!

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"Sometimes it's better to look away than to see it all."

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